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Поделиться22020-10-03 18:53:10
Nice work
Great writing and soo Hott..... I've read a couple Hero stories and this was just as good... might want to here from these two characters again... any chance?
Поделиться32020-10-03 18:53:15
SQUEAMISH???
Why are we here...but for you to make us "SQUEAM"! You've done a bang up job, too, by GOLLY! Excellent prose, my friend.
Поделиться42020-10-03 18:53:20
Second
The first of your stories I read was Words on Skin. This is the second and I'm glad to say it didn't disappoint. 
Поделиться52020-10-03 18:53:26
Great writing, and i agree with most of the others in that this and "Words on Skin" seem much better in terms of depth and plot than some of your others. The Hero stories are okay, but those two almost seem in a different league
Поделиться62020-10-03 18:53:34
Excellent!
Paco Fear, your stories are great!
And your comments on 'Hrrrm' were right on target
Поделиться72020-10-03 18:54:56
Author comment
For "Anony Chris": Here's an example of why it's fun to be me - I can tease out a compliment lurking in the background of your comment. Yes, I wrote all of these stories. And, yes, they are different. WoS and SK, which are similar in many ways, including that they're both written in third person POV, differ from my others which are largely 1st person POV. They *should* sound different and I'm glad you thought they did. Dear sweet Anony, just because you don't like something doesn't mean it "sucks" - just as your comment doesn't "suck." Find something in it you can appreciate. You know, like I just did. 
Поделиться82020-10-03 18:55:02
Your incest stories rave but your others suck
Your writing seems so recognizable on these incest stories but your other writing seems as though done by another person altogether. Are you sure you are writing all these? "Stolen Kisses" and "Words on Skin" are just GREAT! But they are written so differently from the other laundry list of stories. Sweet, sensitive, and so very sexy, unlike your "Hero" stories of which I'm still trying to complete even ONE.
Well keep it up. Maybe I'll go back and see what my problem is and write you again....
Поделиться92020-10-03 18:55:07
"bad"?
Please don't laugh too hard at the idiot below. Some people need help and understanding instead of ridicule. Poor thing, he/she/it couldn't even complete an entire sentence...
Nice tale though, and well written. Lots of fun to read. Thank you author.
Поделиться102020-10-03 18:55:13
brilliant
i really liked this story, it reminded me a bit of 'words on skin' but that was great too so im not complaining. Keep up the good work!
Поделиться112020-10-03 18:55:20
Hrrrrm
I’ve got my egalitarian leanings, but it’s a bit difficult for my feelings to be hurt by a commenter who: (1) can’t find a shift key; (2) can’t write a complete sentence; (3) can’t spell “third” or “boundaries” or “inferring”; and (4) can't grasp the difference between inferring something and implying it anyway. Let’s see, did I miss anything? Chime in on the dufus below if you like folks. The best thing to do with the village idiot is form a circle around him and then point and laugh.
Поделиться122020-10-03 18:55:26
Paco did you upset someone?
this is a fine story so i can only imagine the person who left the prior comment is what? an ex wife or girlfriend. To anyone who is in any doubt its good- read it. -- UK CYNIC
Поделиться132020-10-03 18:55:32
bad
i couldn't even get a thrid of the way down the first page it was so bad. no guy is going to put up with her constant teasing and infering that he is gay he would avoid all contact with her until he went to college even going so far as to talk his parents into letting him go early then he would stay there never to return keep it realistic and within the boundries of human nature please
Поделиться142020-10-03 18:55:37
Amazing
Hats off to the author for a wonderful story filled with humor, great dialogue and two highly engaging siblings. More stories such as this one would be very welcome.
Поделиться152020-10-03 18:55:42
Fantastic!
Wonderful story. Great, compelling characters and I love the interplay in their relationship. Some serious talent here man.
Поделиться162020-10-03 18:55:47
That is superb
Man, if I ever get to write a story as good as that I will be one happy fella.
Поделиться172020-10-03 18:55:53
You Did It. This is a Masterpiece!
Thank you. Thank you. Thank you.
You drew me in to the sibling's story of closeness, which became sexual. This is a must read for everyone.
Поделиться182020-10-03 18:56:00
Sweet, sexy, funny!
I love your stories. The long slow buildup is a big turn on. And even though it's not believable in a literal sense, it's believable as a story, which is good enough for me.
Thanks for sharing!
-Carl
Поделиться192020-10-05 21:32:25
Excellent 
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