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This is the only story on the site that I've read multiple times, and I'll most likely end up reading it again. Looking forward to more from you! Don't keep us waiting too long.

*Applause*
really great literature. think about trying to publish some of your work. great job!

Unbelievable!
Everyone else has already echoed my sentiments, but I have to say that this is the best damned story on this site! Just incredibly well written--bravo!

very well written!
I was very impressed with your writing. The story is extremely erotic, and this might be an odd comment, but thank you for taking the time to use language well. Bad writing really distracts from the story. I also don't think that you should describe the characters physically anymore than you did. This way we can all imagine what we find most attractive. It was nice not to have a typical blond, D cup female character for once. I think such blunt descriptions would have taken away from the eroticism of the story. Both characters were extremely sexy.

Wow!
That was amazing! It wasn't corny like most of these stories are and I really fell in love with the characters. The ending really made me feel satisfied! I am going to look for more things by this author. Oh and did I mention that it was SO SEXY?!?!

Please keep writing!
This is the best story I have read so far on this site! In a way it reminded me of an historical romance, but with raw passion and violence. As another reader (a woman like me) mentioned the beating and specifically the punches to the face, I am not too sure about, but overall kept me wet and unable to stop reading. Please keep writing, your very talented.

One Of The Best, If Not THE Best
I truly enjoyed your use of narative, the fast pace, and the eroticisom your tale invoked. This coming from a womans perspective...I doubt many of us would enjoy being punched in the face once, let alone repeatedly, but somehow you made this story work. I only have 3 negs to share. One, for me the use of the word "arse" instead of behind, ass, cheek, etc...was a real turn off; it didn't blend with the nature of the story, and sounded too cute in a down home country sorta way. LOL Two, you left Sue entirly to the imagination as to her looks. And 3, you honestly did leave the anal assult till later...it never came! Aside from my personal little gripes, you really hit the mark, and I don't think it would be a stretch to say that you could do this professionally.

Happy Writing,

Dripping wet
It's so hard to find a story that can keep my interest. It was actually hard for me to decide if I wanted to masturbate to it or keep reading, so I had to do both!
PLEASE keep up the good work!!!