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Поделиться22020-10-03 18:20:49
Fantastic
Fantastic story and it serves the bitch right. lol You don't give it out, it will be found elsewhere.
Поделиться32020-10-03 18:20:56
repetition
Good story but do you have to repeat the size of her tits every time you mention them, it is boring we know how big they are, you told us in the beginning, that's enough.
Поделиться42020-10-03 18:21:03
Write a damn sequel already
Please
Поделиться52020-10-03 18:21:09
BEAUTIFFUL
THE STORY IS GOOD AS IT IS ABOUT MAKING RIGHT CHOICES AND NOT BEING A COARD
Поделиться62020-10-03 18:21:16
great story
one of my favorites. when do we get to read the sequel. I feel sure that Kathy has been having an affair with one of her high brow friends either man or woman or both.
bring us up to date on John and Rachel and the kids/ it would be nice to find out why his ex wife to be turned into a cold fish towards him. if you have written one what is it called if not clue us in as to when it will be ready.
Поделиться72020-10-03 18:21:22
Good premise incompletely executed
Rachel has obviously selected her man and will do whatever it takes to land him. I'd like to have seen more of her eagerly using him and her encouraging him to do so. I'd also like to see an epilogue where Kathy and John end up in divorce court and the judge proceeds to take Kathy to the cleaners following depositions from Wendy, Rachel's mother, and a couple of the neighbors.
Поделиться82020-10-03 18:21:30
great story
Rachel, John and the kids. Looks like Johns sister is on there side. The wife a cold fish I bet has been having a affair that's why she is such a bitch/
When do I get to read the follow up story.
Поделиться92020-10-03 18:21:36
Sweet story
I loved it. How awesome is falling in love AND great sex. As good as it gets.
Поделиться102020-10-03 18:21:59
almost very good
Excellent except for the very last sentence. Really stupid. Next time allow the reader's mind to interpret the future.
Поделиться112020-10-03 18:22:06
AMEN! AWESOME STORYLINE!!!
AMEN! to what Anonymous wrote on 03/04/18!!! If you want an editor for your future chapter of this story, you can contact me at cocorox1818 at yahoo dot com. Let's talk!
Поделиться122020-10-03 18:22:12
series
great story I have read it at least 5 times. when are you going to do a follow up that tells what her parents think and about the wife who was she sleeping with and the life and love of john and Rachel after they moved into town home. MORE PLEASE
Поделиться132020-10-03 18:22:18
Does he...
,,,cheat on the babysitter with the new babysitter?
Поделиться142020-10-03 18:22:27
Need more!
You should give us a part 2, Show us what their life becomes.
Поделиться152020-10-03 18:22:35
Thanks Everyone!
Thanks for all the positive Feedback, everyone! I really appreciate it.
I was wondering if I could ask a favor. Could everyone who really likes this story try the girl with the Silver Trombone and The Pastor's Halloween Confusion? And comment either there or lit feedback to me. I want to know if this one is that much better than the other two, or if you guys haven't read those two because they have bad titles. lol
Thanks!
Sethp
Поделиться162020-10-03 18:22:41
A Pleasure To Read
The story was erotic with shades of maturity, finesse, and professionalism entwined into a beautiful story. This is so realistic that one might firmly believe that this is just a reproduction of some personal events. I don't know the author but I would like to read several sequels or other chapters. What interests me would be what happens when the wife realizes that the babysitter is her replacement? Do the babysitter's parents have a volcanic uproar when they find out? What feelings are expressed when the ex-wife drops the children off and smells the home filled with laughter, aromas of baking and roast, and happiness? I liked this story - my favorite.
Поделиться172020-10-03 18:22:47
Amazing!
This needs a sequel. Busty Babysitter: Townhouse Dreams!
Поделиться182020-10-05 21:20:05
Very good story.
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